Fellini, the director
me-drinking socially
I’m fine
Cut to
just north of here
under freeway
sleeping
blanket, pillow
in my ear…lost
Cut
morning
west of my bedroll
close by
too close
woman and
her
children
gathering among the worn glass
once rented furniture
collecting a home
for
the children
would soon be moving into..
no maps
cut to night shot
on the west side
a used up couple
in their
car
loving and loving and loving and loving
going down
character study
the denial
the drinking
the ache
the lonliness
the ugly
the numb
the temporary
the slip
the wagon
the wheel
the moon
the stars
the lying on my back…
south
it’s a take
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